Man in the mirror

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When expressions reflected in the mirror
Life refracted through my past
I danced with you like an innocent child
Sometimes I acted before you like a superstar
You have painted my moods
And endured my true colors
Whether it is hot or cold
Mirror does its job
Mirror is a true friend of man
And I am the man in the mirror

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  2. irfan
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 05:19:16

    cool man lovely poetry keep up the good work

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  3. jintu
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:00:25

    good wrk dear…n its abslutly true!!!

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  4. Poetry & Icecream
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:40:22

    So true. I love these lines “And you taught me to turn around, To see the ones running behind me”. Very wise 🙂

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  5. anuja
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 12:13:57

    Well Antony..it is a really good thought and concept …..but the usages in the lines are more like sentences in some areas…..and short poetry is good as well.. it helps u concentrate more on the concept and gives beauty wen u put it down in a few words…just.. a suggestion…I do respect the right of the writer…..waiting for the next thought of yours…….

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  6. Jingle
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 18:49:45

    welcome,

    well fine tuned words, cheers.
    enjoyed it.

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  7. cynthiacherian
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 18:50:25

    no words to say. I realy loved it. Thanks anthony .

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  8. cynthia cherian
    Aug 04, 2011 @ 14:12:21

    Hats off anthony…..lovely one. Thanks anthony

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  9. anish
    Aug 05, 2011 @ 09:55:55

    standing front of the mirror naked and your mirror is telling you to strip off? Hmmmm suprised it didn’t ask you to make love… Lol jk

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  10. anish
    Aug 05, 2011 @ 09:56:41

    nice poem… You must love that mirror so much huh…

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  11. vazra
    Aug 05, 2011 @ 18:42:25

    nice

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  12. mylunar
    Aug 06, 2011 @ 02:48:54

    Wonderful poem. Nicely said – great lines.

    Hi the man in the mirror
    For the mirror doesn’t lie
    For the man, does he lie?

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    • antomaniax
      Aug 06, 2011 @ 05:58:48

      Hi Mylunar,a half truth is a whole lie.A mirror doesn’t lie, but we do lie.And a lie is loudest when we lie to our selves…Thank you so much for visiting my blog and commenting on my post! I really appreciate it! Anthony.

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  13. Kay Salady
    Aug 06, 2011 @ 10:40:46

    I am so very happy that you came by to read my poem so that I’d have the opportunity to read yours. It’s truly been a pleasure and an honor. This poem is so meaningful. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Blessings!

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  14. Asha
    Aug 06, 2011 @ 20:43:35

    A very good start in poetry…u definitly have some skills in it.. keep on trying…well done

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  15. Dhanya Joseph
    Aug 10, 2011 @ 07:28:49

    Gud job antony……its really an awesome work. Loved it. . Its true that, we often run behind people who doesnt want to be wth us, and is blind to see who is waiting to hear a word frm us. Never too late to realise and appreciate the value of good friends, when we look behind and beside us. Friends are blessings always. Keep writing….its a gift frm God, to express urself n words. ( However, when the mirror shows u the people running behind u, to be ur frnds….dsnt dat contradict the concept dat ur mirror is ur only frnd and who wshs to b wth u???? its just my perception, and u mght hv hd a diff concept 😛 ).

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  16. ambili
    Aug 12, 2011 @ 08:53:39

    daaaaa cool….

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  17. Jack Edwards
    Aug 12, 2011 @ 18:36:25

    Wow great poem. Loved the use of repeating the word ‘Mirror’ throughout.

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  18. Noble
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 11:10:46

    Good job

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  19. Tintu Varghese
    Feb 25, 2012 @ 17:43:58

    Hi Anthony.
    Excellent piece of art.Beautifully depicted your thoughts and values in words.This poem indeed has got a good rhythm too.Your vision is superb .Example,
    You reminded me to strip and to take off clothes of showiness.
    You taught me to turn around and look for people who run behind me..
    Great work man.. Keep going..You indeed has got the required or more talent..
    Best Wishes. God Bless You…

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  20. antomaniax
    Feb 27, 2012 @ 12:26:27

    @Tintu: Thank you!

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  21. Keerthana
    Aug 21, 2012 @ 03:44:15

    No, that was for DJ…

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