Fishy fish

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You are a big fish swims in a fast lane
Swimming in desperation to build reputation
But you live in a small pond covered by a fishing-line
Somebody Teach us
Teach us how to swim backwards to the world of calm waters
Teach us everything that we have forgotten to learn.
Deep inside we are all fish
Big fish out of water.

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34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. joyce
    Jul 25, 2011 @ 20:52:07

    fishy fish reminded me of my thinking stuck in a pond with strings attached not knowing vat to do with life…

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  2. PALLAVI
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 04:49:17

    HAPPY?

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  3. sajan
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 05:20:27

    oh fantabulous

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  4. geez
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 06:13:31

    impressed keep the eyes open

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  5. Vyomswan
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 06:38:59

    The poem truly depicts the mind of a relentless thinker whose thoughts have been haunting him always..someone who need a hope on a solid rock bt couldnt reach to it somehow..feels as if the heart of the poet is all tangled up in wires of thorn..being a captive to his own fears pulls him back from progress..This is the vibe i got from the poem.
    Now, about the correction i presume in the 32nd sentence it ought to be “build”..and i would like the next sentence to be “Lurking in the shadows to hunt” rather than adding the “Just to”..
    Your poems reminds the reader of his/her inner thoughts which most of the people tries to mask with various social gestures…a fairly good poem.

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  6. antomaniax
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 15:23:02

    Your comments are ,indeed, valuable for the betterment of up-coming poems..Thank you so much for your valuable time dear friend..

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  7. cynthia cherian
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 20:42:43

    anthony awsome poems… Wish to c a poem abt frnds n frndship….

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  8. Chikku Susan Kurian
    Jul 27, 2011 @ 06:55:09

    anthonyyyyyy………..I don’t know what to tell….its simply superb……..
    keep doing…..congrats ma frnd….really proud of u….

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  9. tomasz
    Jul 27, 2011 @ 11:49:09

    proud to be ur bro….

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  10. anish
    Jul 30, 2011 @ 04:39:08

    Wow very good… I’m impressed, man

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  11. anuja
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 13:23:21

    it’s a nice poem Anthony..

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  12. George Andrews
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 16:14:46

    It is a deep anguish of the mind….You started brilliantly………became too wordy in the middle…need to mature…keep writing…..

    I think most people go through the same agony….and the fate allows it to happen.

    You fickle your fins..I don’t think the word ‘fickle’ suits here.
    Why would I complaint – complain

    Wish you all the best!

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  13. L. Summerton Morgan
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 17:33:17

    Excellent read! Fight the good fight brother….it is worth the anquish. In time, you will find comfort swimming upstream or downstream….and always relish those calm waters. It is there you will find the peace of mind necessary for introspection and growth!

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    • antomaniax
      Aug 01, 2011 @ 18:20:17

      Hello Mr.Morgan, I have enjoyed reading your poetry,too.Thank you very much indeed for your valuable time and advise…I will definitely keep an eye on your suggestions….Anthony.

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  14. tenzin
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 18:13:03

    Hi I dun know much abt poetry, but i enjoyed
    goin through it , n yeah gud work.

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  15. robbins
    Aug 01, 2011 @ 15:37:24

    annaaa … polappan thannee … namukku ithil comment cheyyan yogyathayilla … its better that the best .. i know its your poem and your life … keep it up

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  16. Noble
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 11:25:13

    We are all fishy fishes

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  17. Amy Blecha
    Oct 06, 2012 @ 17:07:38

    playful,
    playing with nature is cool…

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  18. Aya Wilson
    Oct 10, 2012 @ 14:26:07

    fish out of water?

    vivid imagery in your words.
    Happy Rally.

    Reply

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