Yawn

yawn

I looked around and closed my eyes.
I walked around you left me out.
I tried to nap and need a gap.
Cause all I see
All I hear, all I feel is you.

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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mithila Layola
    Jul 24, 2011 @ 03:58:00

    I m loving it…@not only this piece of write-up,but all…

    Reply

  2. antomaniax
    Jul 24, 2011 @ 14:50:39

    Thanks..

    Reply

  3. Vyomswan
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 06:51:09

    I can sense a horizon of difference in perception between the reality and ur understanding of God in the poem…thats all I see in this poem..but the choice of words and the breadth of thoughts are better in this one than ur other poems like “Depth of silence” and “Height of..”.

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  4. antomaniax
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 15:30:53

    There you go..

    Reply

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