”The you in you”

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When I awakened swiftly from the grave of grief and taint,
felt strange feeling of innocence that repels from mankind
Now I see blue sky and golden sunshine,
There is no tinge of regret, no shame.
Oh yeah it’s beautiful!
I walked through the starry night,
And asked; what makes me change?
All these years I was living under the shadows of my own world,
Acting astonishingly instead of living, for the drama what we call life,
Now I made a little window that opens to the real world
To find the inevitable you in you.

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48 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jose
    Apr 17, 2009 @ 18:10:35

    marvelous. a sleepin poet awakened today. keep doin………

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  2. Ebin
    Apr 17, 2009 @ 18:47:45

    Aliya………..Marvellos!
    God has a given u a great talent……………….
    Keep on doing……….
    WISH U AL THE BST

    Reply

  3. Naveen MariGowda
    Apr 17, 2009 @ 20:47:14

    u r a gr8 talented guy ..myan..the poetry..is gud….n meaning full….
    i am not gud at giving comments…y wouldnt u add rhyming words…its just a suggestion..keep goin..let the marvelous com out….!

    Reply

  4. Anna Perretta
    Apr 18, 2009 @ 00:18:01

    Hi Anthony,
    Absolutely loved it. Beautiful, touching. U have a God given talent. I myself love poetry. Have had a few published.
    Keep it up and All the Best.

    xxx

    Anna (Yoville Pal)

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  5. Danya Joseph
    Apr 18, 2009 @ 07:57:11

    AN ENTIRE CHANGE FROM THE PREVIOUS ONE, NOW U R ALIVE….A REALLY TOUCHNG ONE..(IN BETWN D LINES..IS IT “HARDWOOD” OR “HEARTWOOD”?) AND MAY I KNW WHO IS THIS “SHE”?

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  6. The Scribbling Papers
    Apr 18, 2009 @ 18:23:12

    Hey buddy its really beautiful.

    Reply

  7. Shaik Zakeer Hussain
    Apr 18, 2009 @ 18:24:48

    Amazing my friend.

    Reply

  8. Vince
    Apr 20, 2009 @ 15:20:05

    Kollam…
    Ithu nee thanne ezhuthiyathano?
    olinjukidakkunna kaviye nee puratheduthu alle?

    Reply

  9. ajeesh
    Apr 20, 2009 @ 18:03:09

    antony

    it is awe inapiring

    bring out more

    its only a bigining

    Reply

  10. jophil
    May 05, 2009 @ 07:02:38

    kool mate!

    Reply

  11. jasmine
    Jun 11, 2009 @ 17:41:13

    haiiiiiiiiiii tats gr8t never knew abt ur hidden talent keep it up………

    Reply

  12. Mithila Layola
    Jul 24, 2011 @ 04:12:50

    You are unbelievable..

    Reply

  13. shine xavier
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 03:44:38

    this seems to be like flirting………

    Reply

  14. Vyomswan
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 07:33:24

    This is a much better one than your recent poems…i like the intensity of the emotion and the flexibility in expressing in this one…there is a strength in the poet unlike the other shrinking vibe your other poems transmit.

    Reply

  15. cynthia cherian
    Jul 26, 2011 @ 20:31:38

    anthonichoo……u r realy g8. All d best….improve ur talents.

    Reply

  16. jyothi
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:44:05

    Haiii its so touching and nice poem.

    Reply

  17. deepak nair
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 17:48:34

    nice one..

    Reply

  18. bradly titto
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 18:03:07

    alliya u truly made me to be with u ,,, keep moving buddy,, we all r with u.
    we all r very proud about you…

    Reply

  19. TOM
    Aug 06, 2011 @ 05:24:14

    Beautiful poem!

    Reply

  20. Jennifaye
    Oct 22, 2011 @ 11:30:24

    Uncovering, unraveling, revealing the truth is always an empowering feeling. Thanks for sharing this 🙂

    Reply

  21. Morning
    Oct 23, 2011 @ 02:16:19

    creatively beautiful.

    🙂

    Reply

  22. Uma
    Oct 23, 2011 @ 18:46:21

    Great touching lines ! I liked the optimism you expressed after you find your love 🙂 Emotions well expressed !

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  23. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    Oct 25, 2011 @ 15:50:25

    words that help to wipeout my feelings into poems.

    love the idea, keep poeticizing.

    🙂

    Reply

  24. The Orange Tree
    Nov 02, 2011 @ 01:44:22

    great work.

    Happy Rally.

    come in tomorrow for week 55, bless you.

    🙂

    Reply

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